After students finish their homework at 826 Valencia’s after-school tutoring program, program staffers Jorge Eduardo Garcia and Raúl J. Alcantar engage them in writing exercises.
The young authors produce many wonderful pieces, and Mission Loc@l plans to feature a few of them each week.
The prompts for these selections focused on autumn and the Day of the Dead.
“Death of a Language,”
an ofrenda for the altar by Mildred Dzib, age 10
Some languages that are dying are the Native American languages, and they are dying because English, Spanish, and Chinese are taking their place in the world because of business. When you lose your language, you lose your culture. When you lose your culture, your heart dies.
“The Broken Leaf,”
a short story by Eduardo Delgado, age 10
St. James School
A leaf called Rex has lived in a tree. He has lived there for many years, and now he is about to fall. He is really scared. A few friends want to help Rex stay in the tree, so the friends help him pull up and he stays. So now he is back in the tree for more years. Their friends are all boys. Their color is green. They play and also like to play tag.
“The Flying Kite,”
a short story by Angelica Guzman, age 11
St. James School
One windy, autumn day, two girls named Carly and Cameron decided to make a kite so that they could fly it. There were a bunch of leaves outside, and they were colorful. There were red, orange, and yellow leaves flying everywhere. Carly and Cameron started making their kite. Once they finished their kite, they went outside and the big, beautiful kite started flying. Suddenly Cameron accidentally let go of the kite, and it flew away! The two girls started chasing the flying kite. When they couldn’t see it anymore, they looked for it on the ground. None of the girls found anything. A few hours later, Carly saw the string of the kite, which was thin and blue. After that, they saw the big, beautiful, colorful kite under a bunch of colorful leaves. In the end, Carly and Cameron went inside of Cameron’s house for a cup of tasty hot chocolate and sweet, delicious cupcakes.